tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17362981.post116684583132411980..comments2023-12-18T16:58:26.278-08:00Comments on Acrobat of the Road: MOUNT KAILASH: AXIIS MUNDI AND THE VOID SYNDROMEJuan Pablo Villarinohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09595291364661202905noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17362981.post-24239541380709308632008-07-15T15:12:00.000-07:002008-07-15T15:12:00.000-07:00Great adventures, but your broken English is so de...Great adventures, but your broken English is so demanding, it makes for a turgid read. Have you considered the help of a translator or an editor? <BR/><BR/>Get together with a dedicated English coach and your writing will expand.Matt Gibbshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14203171830427335875noreply@blogger.com